Directors should not write their own screenplays. Bad idea. It rarely works. Woody Allen can pull it off only about half of the time. The reason is that writers become so enamoured of their script, they can't see its flaws. A scene must move the story forward, else it should be deleted. Writers just can't kill their own darlings. The director must. When director and writer is the same person, it's like judge and defendant are the same person.
The first third of this movie (the restaurant/taxi/bedroom sequences) drags on forever. Really, what is the point? To peek into the female psyche? A legitimate purpose, no doubt, albeit it could be served in much less cinematic time.
The rest of the movie is a cross between Fellini's "And the Ship Sails On" and "Lord of the Flies." The intention is honest, the performances are good, however the script really needs tightening. How much fake vomit can we take? Endless vomiting shots do not add any entertainment value. The silly antics of the Russian magnate over the Public Address System is another plot device we could do without.
It's a pity because the premise of this movie is valid, the story arc is well developed, the acting talent is there. Perhaps it needs re-editing in the hands of an expert editor.
The first third of this movie (the restaurant/taxi/bedroom sequences) drags on forever. Really, what is the point? To peek into the female psyche? A legitimate purpose, no doubt, albeit it could be served in much less cinematic time.
The rest of the movie is a cross between Fellini's "And the Ship Sails On" and "Lord of the Flies." The intention is honest, the performances are good, however the script really needs tightening. How much fake vomit can we take? Endless vomiting shots do not add any entertainment value. The silly antics of the Russian magnate over the Public Address System is another plot device we could do without.
It's a pity because the premise of this movie is valid, the story arc is well developed, the acting talent is there. Perhaps it needs re-editing in the hands of an expert editor.
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