Store clerk Eve Sutton is the lookout for her comrades as they steal from the department store. Her sister Joan Sutton reports her suspicions to her supervisor Mrs. Briggs. Store owner's son Charley Phelps is taken with Joan. When Mrs. Briggs' dead body is found, the police investigators descend upon the store and round up everybody.
Fifty minutes is not really a full film but it's not a short either. It has the form of a whodunnit in a locked room. Only it has non of the tension. The attempted comedy is not funny. If anything, it loses any tension with the bumbling cops routine and the ridiculous actions. The cops don't call for backup. They don't try to barricade the civilians in a safe room. It's a lot of bad character work as people are literally getting murdered and nobody seems to behave realistically. It needs to be a slapstick Scooby Doo whodunnit adventure if it decides to be an actual comedy.
Fifty minutes is not really a full film but it's not a short either. It has the form of a whodunnit in a locked room. Only it has non of the tension. The attempted comedy is not funny. If anything, it loses any tension with the bumbling cops routine and the ridiculous actions. The cops don't call for backup. They don't try to barricade the civilians in a safe room. It's a lot of bad character work as people are literally getting murdered and nobody seems to behave realistically. It needs to be a slapstick Scooby Doo whodunnit adventure if it decides to be an actual comedy.