I think Matt's visions in the desert should've been cut out. I also find Telford's story arc extremely annoying. How is it that he is continually allowed to insert himself into the situation on the Destiny when he isn't even really there? Why don't the higher-ups stop him? He has to know that any action he takes while he's in Young's body will just be undone by Young when he gets back. This dynamic creates a unnecessary and annoying back and forth tug-o-war between characters and does not advance the story. It also would have been nice if, instead of all the unnecessary scenes in the desert, we could have seen what happened to the other two scientists that went through the gate. That would've been way more interesting than watching everyone walking through the desert.
Review of Air: Part 3
